˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ Draft 1 ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆
This is the very first idea that comes to my mind.
ੈ✩‧₊˚ Draft 2 ੈ✩‧₊˚
In this draft, I got feedback from my teacher. I misunderstood the capitalization. The action should be written normally, not capitalized, so I made changes there. I also added more emotions and actions into the character's dialogue.
✧.* Draft 3 ✧.*
However, in the third draft, I intentionally replaced the part after "Are you tired?" with a completely new idea to increase the interaction between them and to give the audience a hint of the male lead's childhood trauma.
˖ ᡣ𐭩 ⊹ ࣪ ౨ৎ˚₊ Draft 4 ˖ ᡣ𐭩 ⊹ ࣪ ౨ৎ˚₊
This is the last change of my screenplay. I realized that the idea of being in the hospital was impossible as there were no suitable places for me to shoot. Therefore, I came up with a new script that limits the hospital's scenes. Moreover, I changed the dialogue to make it more realistic.
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